My phrasing is fine. You’re the one who jumped to conclusions.
[ Nevermind how less than a year ago, Adam knelt in the middle of a pentagram and agreed to be a sacrifice to a magical forest. That was different. He had almost known it wouldn’t kill him in the process. ]
Your style's magical fantasy! Your style's whatever Gansey's been talking about lately. Your style's bad Latin grammar.
[ Adam knocks several Latin-titled spellbooks off a shelf into the water. It doesn’t help, but it makes him feel calmer when they splash Ronan. He’s seen enough dream objects to know that they don’t follow a strict sequence of events or adhere to physics.
If this were a dream, the books wouldn’t splash. He’d knock them over and forget them before they hit the water. ]
If it’s not a dream, what is it? Because I know what the key line feels like. This ain't it.
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[ Nevermind how less than a year ago, Adam knelt in the middle of a pentagram and agreed to be a sacrifice to a magical forest. That was different. He had almost known it wouldn’t kill him in the process. ]
Your style's magical fantasy! Your style's whatever Gansey's been talking about lately. Your style's bad Latin grammar.
[ Adam knocks several Latin-titled spellbooks off a shelf into the water. It doesn’t help, but it makes him feel calmer when they splash Ronan. He’s seen enough dream objects to know that they don’t follow a strict sequence of events or adhere to physics.
If this were a dream, the books wouldn’t splash. He’d knock them over and forget them before they hit the water. ]
If it’s not a dream, what is it? Because I know what the key line feels like. This ain't it.